Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays we have sharply developing in Science and especially Technology, so many people think the school subjects which are related to Science and Technology are more important than History while other people believe History is still one of the most important subjects in schools.
Many schycologists believe the ability to read and write is not enough today. Also, people should learn to work with computers and other electricity devices. Consequently, it is vitally that students learn Technology and new Science at school. Furthermore, many parents are not familiar with new technologies. It is necessary that parents learn about computers and digital devices too. It can help them to control their children in using of internet and social medias.
On the other hand, some old subjects like History which always used to teach at schools are important too. With learning History, students can be familiar with societies and people that there were in the past. Further, it is important children and teenagers learn about their country's culture and some subjects like History can help them. additionally, all students are not the same. They have variety interests and their favorite subjects are different. Many students do not like Science and Technology, they prefer to know about History. So, if these students follow their interests, they can be successful people in their subjects.
In my opinion, all subjects that are teached at schools are important. While there is a student who likes to learn about a subject, we should learn that subject at schools. However, all of students should learn about new technologies and it is a good ability for their career in the future. I agree that History is a important subject but it is not important than Science or Technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, still, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66187814137 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477508650519 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.5251939145 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1111111111 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0555555556 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311288900438 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965494637565 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105089276593 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21890365507 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116226338714 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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