Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and Technology are more than important than history.
Argument
While some people claim that we must respect to history because it shows the way how our ancients did to build up our countries, others believe that we should look toward to the future by approaching science and technology in an early age that are more vital than sit in chair and listen to teacher teach about boring stories occurred a long time ago. To an extent, I think history is important as well as science and technology because both content various valuable information.
some scientists recently use technology to find out what happened in the past. that news shows technology and history are not an absolute separation field but they combine to help each other. For example, scientists need to research a earlier disease by using technique to analyse fossil in human; therefore, they could deal with sickness easily, which is an evolution of previous ones.
history also plays an important role in figure sovereignty. our ancients blooded to keep each inches of land. For instance, if Hoang sa and Truong sa archipelagoes are not have document appertainary Vietnam, these archipelagoes can be teared by many countries. In recent years, the development of technology is defined how strong one country is because the more modern the more productivity; thus, the current of economical will run faster. Moreover, the expand of artificial intelligent is the base to reach outer space.
in short, the essential of history and technology can't deny. they supplement each other, since they take part in current of life fluently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72856702976 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656126482213 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.8660830598 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19900131624 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628386415994 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566583665083 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105831453783 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060834686055 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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