Walking is known to be beneficial for health and yet fewer people are walking there days.
What are the reasons for this?
What can be done to tackle this problem?
At present, doing exercise plays an essential role life. Many physical trainers advise to going for a walk thanks to its advantages to health, but a small portion of people follow their advice. This essay will consider some causes of this reluctance and offer possible solutions.
Let us start with reasons why people are unwilling to make a trip on foot as a healthy form of exercise. The first reason is that they commonly feel weary after work. People usually promise to commence walking in the neighborhood, but, as soon as they arrive their apartments, they cannot make themselves to keep their pledge. Another cause is that they have a great deal of household duties. Obligations around the house often leave people with little spare time for a walk, so they postpone it for the upcoming days and, eventually, abandon it. Furthermore, they have low self-discipline. Many people want to go for a walk, but when it comes to the action, they become reluctant as well as try to avoid it.
However, some fitness instructors suggest the following steps to handle this problem. Firstly, people should walk a large distance before taking a means of transport. For example, they should park their cars two districts before their office, so that, when they finish the working day, they have to go to the parking lot. Secondly, they should delegate their housework to the other members of family. For instance, mothers can arrange schedules of chores and, then, distribute each to their children, so that they will have some time to go for a walk. Moreover, they should reward themselves for every walk. People should let themselves to do something pleasant, when they have overcome their laziness, which normally discourages them from a walk.
In conclusion, although there are many obstacles for city dwellers on the way to go for a walk, it is possible to combat these hindrances by taking the above mentioned measures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96594427245 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58560089315 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.849119052 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219361827763 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770721120717 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557528428715 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150154330449 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0141176823912 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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