Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples.
This generation is blessed than the previous generations due to technological advancement, which have facilitated them significantly in terms of comfort and making better enviroment for them to study peacefully. Some people believe that for learning to be effective the environment should be conducive including better comfort and also they should focus on studies only rather than doing a part time job. This essay will discuss how this notion is true.
To begin with, study requires full attention to understand the concepts in depth. Being employed at the same time will certainly reduce the concentration level, thus affecting studies. For instance, a student working on research needs to be fully focused on the task in order to get the desired results. Hence, doing a part time job along the studies will affect the quality of research.
Secondly, on jobs there are interaction with different kind of people, of which some might be rude. With this rude behaviour a person is bound to suffer emotionally and psychologically. For example, on a job, a superior might be pressurising the sub ordinate to get the job done. This pressure, definitely will affect the person psychologically and therefore the person who might be studying also will suffer in his studies.
To conclude, part time jobs affects the student by decrease in concentration level and psychological effects. In my opinion, doing a job along with studies will definitely affect the studies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...cus on studies only rather than doing a part time job. This essay will discuss how this n...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...get the desired results. Hence, doing a part time job along the studies will affect the q...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... suffer in his studies. To conclude, part time jobs affects the student by decrease in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24152542373 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95529204602 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2721545516 50.4703680194 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148669562988 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609645055154 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553831454059 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102586698632 0.151781067708 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03597784684 0.0609392437508 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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