Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is an issue about the original of brainpower. Some teachers believe that it comes from the birth, while some brain scientists say that people develop it through training. This essay will consider both ideas and agrees with the idea of developing the mental potential.
Let us start with the reasons why some teachers claim that thinking abilities are hereditary. The first reason is that gifted people normally have excellent memory. Some children show impressive results in quoting poems, because they have inherent ability to memorize texts at the first sight. Another reason is that talented people commonly have the ability to solve mathematical tasks quickly. Some people, who are talented in maths, can find a solution to the most difficult mathematical problems faster than others. Furthermore, great artists usually have rich imagination. Prominent painters usually make the greatest pictures, as they were born with the mental potential to create both colorful and detailed world in the mind.
However, some brain scientists state that the ability to think well comes through education. Firstly, ordinary people develop memory. Many people, who are untalented at memorizing, can develop this skill by various methods of memorization, such as mnemonic technique. Secondly, all children get education from teachers. Schools help children, regardless of how gifted they are to enhance their abilities, because education makes them use their potential to the maximum. Moreover, talents gain greatness through hard work. The intensive usage of their abilities, no matter what they have inherited from their parents, defines their success.
In conclusion, although some teachers advocate that the ability to think depends on hereditary genes, I think that people gain this ability through education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58695652174 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58372712815 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7285627137 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158392094205 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487551589001 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536817539109 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113678272229 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416180322059 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.55 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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