The hatred towards foreign people among some of the nations have become the external trend thought out the people of different cultures, despite the encouragement of equality by governments and some of the societies too.
The civilisation of the modern era may have reached the peaks of success but at the same time seemed to be hitting the rock bottom. The flow of thoughts from people o people have enriched the notion of watered for refuees, have raised the global issues of racism and xenophobia. Regardless of well educated and well developed civilians the hatred towards outsides is spereading on a drastic level.
However, the question of origin of this discrimination remain same that if this hatered have been taught to people or it's in the genes. From scientific point of view, the born does not bring any psychological cheracteristics with him, instend he is being shaped by the people and the environment around him, which points out the inevitable fact that the emergence of this phenomena has nothing to do with the early life of the human.
On the other side, the well known trend of spreading rumours and the customary practices of a particular nation which have been everlasting, which comprises these controversies and nagativity are eventually envading every civilian's mind essential factor to be cut down seems to be the expansion of the notions of racism and xenophobia.
From my belief, a developed nation is all about having developed people and if some how the existance of misconceptions about foreign people would be eliminated wisely, for which we would have to persuade the sociely in a right way, then we would be able to settle this issue and knock down racism and xenophobia.
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- The hatred towards foreign people among some of the nations have become the external trend thought out the people of different cultures, despite the encouragement of equality by governments and some of the societies too. 56
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- If racism and xenophobia are attitudes that we are taught not born with, then the problems that come from than can be resolved. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95219123506 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78420786998 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585657370518 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.4986338696 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.571428571 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8571428571 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189392734645 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827665573929 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529936028412 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107401112417 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446675924414 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.