The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams describe the life cycle and the technologies used for cement production, also the concrete production steps for construction.
In overall, the raw materials processed under certain circumstances with the use of machine results to produce the cement, where the generated output mixed with other ingredients form the concrete.
From the first diagram, the limestone and clay groups in a curser to generate the fine powder. Those powders pass through the mixture, the rotating heater is constantly heating when the powder moved through the steps it outputs the volatile substances. Those substances refine using the grinder and it produces a cement, the cement is packed to the bags and ready for a sale.
Again from the second, The mixture contains half gravel, a quarter of sand, 15 percentage of sand and 10% of water.
The concrete mixer mixes the substances with constant rotation for some period of time. The final output generated from the machine is concrete used for building purposes.
- People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? 73
- The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. 11
- The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people askingif they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98.The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 73, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26543209877 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63851885356 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4843716542 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244090740006 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109336738672 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921555189379 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130803161249 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717261020543 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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