More and more people are opting for ready-made food instead of freshly cooked food. Does this development have more advantages over disadvantages?
it is certainly true that nowadays many masses prefer to take prepackaged food and not to prepare fresh meal. although the ready-made food save the time of people but its negative impacts such as obesity and food poisoning on human health could bot be overlooked.
To begin with, there are plethora of drawbacks to take unhealthy food. As the ready-made food is stored in plastic containers and envelops, some poisonous particles of plastic mix up with the cuisine and make it harmful for well-being. Moreover, the food which is kept in artificial environment for longer time may be spoiled. so, if the mortals eat such stored food than they will suffer from certain health issues such as food poisoning and stomach ache. Additionally, the unhealthy food can cause obesity such as, the people who are fond of hamburgers and pizza they generally become obese.
However, some pros of ready-made food can be highlighted. In the modern world, everyone is becoming money minded and they spend more time in their workplaces. In this way, they prefer to take prepackaged food instead of preparing it in their houses due to shortage of time. so, the already prepared food from shops helps them to use precious time in specific activities. Example from my personal experience, my cousin who is living in Canada opt to take ready-made, so that, he can prepare all assignments in that time in which he have to cook fresh food.
In conclusion, although the pre prepared food is helpful as it save the time, however its negative impacts on human health are more as they can suffer from obesity and other digestive problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90145985401 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59421285309 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2445189035 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.307692308 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293811884882 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106557026755 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032279729632 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178186051882 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442068241495 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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