Some people believe that sports are a key element in our society, while others argue that it’s just a recreational activity to be done in one’s free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is an controversial issue about the importance of sports. Some social workers argue that it is imperative aspect of social life, while some gym attendees consider it as a voluntary part of lifestyle. This essay will discuss both points of view and agrees with the gym attendees.
Let us start with the reasons why some social workers claim that sports is an essential part of community. The first reason is that sports allow people communicate with others. People, who feel lonely, can easily make friends with other people at the gym, so it grants them the opportunity to avoid separation from society. Another reason is that sports help people keep fit. People, who suffer from excessive weight, may simply lose it by doing the workout either at the recreational centers or outdoors. Furthermore, sports promote healthy lifestyle. Smokers, for example, tend to stop their unhealthy habit as soon as they go jogging regularly, since these two habits are inconsistent.
However, some gym visitors state that sports is basically an optional part of life. Firstly, people do sports to relax from hustle. Employed people, for instance, normally do sports, such as jogging or brisk walking, to relieve the stress, which they have accumulated during the working day, but consider it as a way to spend leisure time. Secondly, people often abandon exercising. People also are likely to quit doing the exercise, if they either get bored with it or have more important things to do. Moreover, sports normally provides no money. Except professional athletes, ordinary people basically do sports for entertainment, because it provides no income.
In conclusion, even though some social workers believe that sports is a significant aspect of life, I think that people should consider it as a temporary activity, they do at spare time.
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- Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Do you agree that the advantages cars bring outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. Do you agree or disagree? 89
- Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1677852349 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65155036478 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.9299070352 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161708971467 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529212881529 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310484084484 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104457064772 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0116765837662 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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