The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?
It is irrefutable that prevention is better than cure. Number of individuals believe that preventive steps are more useful and necessary as compare to treating infections with drugs and state should allocate more budget on this. I completely agree, because some infections are not treatable and cost of treating infections involve huge amount of money.
Prevention of infection is vital as some disease are not curable therefore the government should raise funds to prevent such infections. Taking control of preliminary stages can save many lives and make the environment healthier and fit for the people. For instance, In India polio vacation campaign is still working as the scientist are unable to invent medicine for the treatment. In addition to that, one infection is always associated with another one, therefore, prevention of one infection can stop the rise of the others.
Cost is another parameter which indicates that prevention should be the primary step for government to control the health problems. Detection of infection and medical treatment involve huge amount of cost to cure the infection and even sometimes patient die because of neglecting symptoms of infections in body. Thus, government must spend more budget in preventive measures as compare to treatment. For instance, Doctors and scientists spend billions of dollars to find out the right medicine for treating patients after patients getting infected. Unfortunately many people because of no cure till the time they can discover effective medicine.
In conclusion, preventive steps are more valuable and effective as compare with medicinal treatments therefore the government should pay more attention to controlling infections at early stages by raising more funds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, therefore, thus, even so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51672862454 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82527391899 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3373349605 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.153846154 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194816792357 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798601925449 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715631526533 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134708653872 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290199183288 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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