Technological access to online music should be free or paid what do you think?

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...y's world is a colossal upsurge In no of people have become a high level sin...
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Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld is a colossal upsurge In no of people have become a high level singer with the...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome a high level singer with the help of online music like you tube, speak songs ...
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Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... tube, speak songs capture video so many methods. There is a widespread worry tha...
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Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...his and I will explain why in this essay There are a number of arguments in favor...
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Line 2, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...not only contribute to in music industry some singers live a good life with the h...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to full'
Suggestion: to full
...ne music. Singer life is very struggle full but also leads to numerous others. Than...
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Line 2, column 476, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s more when its comes to being effective , but they can also enhance the productiv...
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...f prosperity and excellence is concerned In view of the arguments outlined above ...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...efits of online music should be free he help to poor singer and famous in world are ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and famous in world are indeed too great to ignore
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...in world are indeed too great to ignore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 235.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62978723404 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45262495029 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604255319149 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.5024630542 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.1179636068 50.4703680194 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.428571429 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5714285714 20.9669160288 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.25397266985 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157803752506 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060865801986 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559998871689 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115742442416 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381319450003 0.0609392437508 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.3980295567 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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