The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
Use examples and details in your answer.
Human has been through thousand of years building and establishing their own society and community. The 20th century has reached its end with a lot of changes in our technology advances. Now is the time for a new century : the 21 century. There are plenty of things that the new era can bring to mankind.
First of all, technology which we inherit from our the previous generation will continue to have more and more breakthroughs. As the machine has already played a very important roles in every industry, human are making new process so that they can run and learn from their mistakes. Consequently, human roles becomes supervising and managing those rather co-operate with them.
Secondly, we all hoping that in the nearest future mankind would discover more about the universe. The last 50 years had witnessed the first step of human to conquer the dark and infinite space. Now, we are waiting for scientists and professors to find out a way for us to live in another planet such as : Mars. Although this might seem impossible at first, we can believe that everything is on the right track since some signal of life have been founded on the Planet.
Lastly, the environments quality is somewhat people should pay attentions to. The 20th century had damaged the Earth so badly that we are suffering from phenomenon like acid rain, earthquake,... so often. Therefore, it is the matter of life and death to us, the present and the future of our green house to stand up and do somethings about this.
Overall, the future promises a lot of opportunities for us to having a better life and we are the one that holding the key lead to a better day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'role'?
Suggestion: role
...ine has already played a very important roles in every industry, human are making new...
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Line 7, column 46, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
...y, the environments quality is somewhat people should pay attentions to. The 20th cent...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...om phenomenon like acid rain, earthquake,... so often. Therefore, it is the matter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73356401384 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6048744654 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60553633218 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5060364586 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104710386355 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349038851622 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461485985467 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576320773335 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608127927915 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.