Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Author’s claim that men and women, due to their inherent physical strength are not suitable of some task holds some merit as body structure of men’s and women’s are different and work necessating the use of such structure inhibit mens or womans to perform each other’s task. Following are the reasons for my discordance with the author.
Firstly, Women are capable to bearing child in her womb whereas such tasks cannot be performed by mens because of their disparate body structure. Women can also not give birth to child without the aid of men. Such different body structures posses by mens and womens are main inhibitors in allowing them to perform versatile tasks.
Secondly, history is well known for discerning the tasks that should be carried out by mens and women. In past, Mens are the person capable of making social relations, a becoming a leader, etc. whereas women were always imagined as performing chores. Women’s literacy ratio was also very low and they were not given right to vote. It was later, that evolved the role of women in society as important and considering current situation, there are almost no field where women is not taking a part. Though, still there are some job specification, where mens have overruled over womens, like in army, mens are given preference over women because of they are assumed to be more emotionally as well as physically strong compared to women.
However, Except merely two to three task are still considered to be done by men or women, otherwise in almost every field, currently both women and mens are involved. In contrasting previous example, now due to medical advancement, mens are also capable of bearing child, today’s many renowned chef’s are mens, many womens have started their own company and thrived in competing with mens. Thus, jobs positions have been evolved with generation, where both mens and womens can fit in.
on wrapping up, Considering current situation, there is no such task that cannot be performed by either men or women. Men and women positions have evolved with time, which have made mens and womens plenary enough to perform any tasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...hould be carried out by mens and women. In past, Mens are the person capable of making ...
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Line 5, column 461, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fields'?
Suggestion: fields
... current situation, there are almost no field where women is not taking a part. Thoug...
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Line 5, column 639, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...y, mens are given preference over women because of they are assumed to be more emotionally as w...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'task' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'tasks'.
Suggestion: tasks
... However, Except merely two to three task are still considered to be done by men ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n and mens are involved. In contrasting previous example, now due to medical adv...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ere both mens and womens can fit in. on wrapping up, Considering current situat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, whereas, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06983240223 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60364115928 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539106145251 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1886337114 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4375 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318618575759 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111674748603 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469259873861 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194453695354 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100986405313 0.0667264976115 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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