Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
All people has different taste and idea about the job. some of them believe they should find a job and stay in there and do their responsibility and don't care about kind of job and his or her talent. others think they should change their job until they find the best one. in this manuscript we will talk about this issue and try to survey different idea.
As mentioned above, some person like to find a job and do that for the rest of their life and they don't care about their interest and their skills. the important thing for them is do something during the day and earn their salary at the end of the day or month. this is not a god nor bad, because their personality force them to accept this kind of job and they like to have routine life. Hence they choose this method and continue their life until they are retired.
however, others don't like routine life and try to have life with challenge. So they change their job until they find the best one. they accept the risk of this way and try to improve themselves in their skills and knowledge about different job. they increase their connection in different field and find the better way for the rest of their life. this group don't satisfy by the high salary or good position. they are thirsty for learn new thing. therefore if they find out their job is routine and don't learn new thing, they try to change their job.
in conclusion, people has different taste and its difficult to change their way and they born for this kind of life and if they want change their life, they should stop, think and then find better way and start new life. but its difficult and some times you should spent time and money to reach to your goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 10.4138276553 278% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38095238095 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97309696037 2.80592935109 70% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422222222222 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2378950798 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1764705882 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142348930242 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618880196696 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385088759796 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109971549801 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176069059189 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.88 8.58950901804 68% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.