There seems to be increasing number of serious crimes committed each year. While some think the best way is to use the death penalty as deterrent, many people think other measure will be needed. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
Crime rates all over the world has changeable depending on the social events and unique situations of cities. Crimes targeting people life apparently increased in the last years. Some people opine that capital punishment deter offenders committing serious crimes while others believe that it is not enough to solve this problem so that other measurements should be taken. This essay will discuss both of views and reach a decision at the end.
Since the beginning of the communities, capital punishment has been exist and used as a main deterrent tools to stop crimes. At now, death penalty is still executed by many countries in the world. In other words, the function of punishment is to prevent re-offence by implanting strong law reinforcements as a result the death penalty might be chosen under certain circumstances. For instance, during the WW2, the soldiers who are betrayed their countries and give important information to their enemies was sued for their life to avoid spying. As a result, it worked and allies countries prevented the spill of the private information. Hence, some people advocate that under certain conditions, capital punishment might be necessary to prevent crime.
On the other hand, some people believe that death penalty is very brutal for modern ages and other options such as cell imprisonment for life should be considered. To put simply, the capital punishment is irreversible and may damage many innocent people lives and their family. For example, according to a report from supreme judge court of United State, some innocent people who are accused for serious crimes still under arrested or imprisoned because of the lack of certain clues which are still ambiguous but cannot prove with forensic due to technical insufficiency. Thus, due to the gray zones in judicial system, some serious crime can be misinterpreted and cause serious and unpreventable damages in innocent people.
To recapitulate, although a group of people claim that capital punishment is the best way to prevent life-threatening crimes, other believes that it is unfair and other rehabilitation methods should be found. In my opinion, the death penalty is not needed for our times yet plenty of other ways of punishment could prevent serious crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, hence, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25549450549 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80087638527 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9567457247 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5625 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293569643251 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950439522178 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605812140061 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184289374475 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459028026775 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.