You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points:
1) What is the article about?
2) What is the error?
3) What you expect an editor to do?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter regarding the article which was published on 22nd June 2019 in ‘Daily Miirror’ news paper. The title was named as “Biography of famous lecturer Mr.K.L.Silva ”.But unfortunately some facts which were published about him was not correct.
Let me explain in more detail. Since I have worked with him for 10 years, I know him very well. Therefore I am writing this letter to point out some false facts which were included into the article. According to that article, it says that Mr Silva has competed his higher studies from the University of Greenwich. But it should be corrected as “University of Monash”. Not only that, article says that he was blessed with 2 babies at the age of years. But make sure to amend that as ‘3 childen’.at
As we all know, Daily mirror is the one of the famous news papers in Australia.it is really important to verify all the details before publishing that. Publishing false information regarding a famous persons also cannot be accepted. Hence I request you to correct all the above mentioned details and republish the article in the near future.
If you need further clarifications, please contact me through my email address.
Your Sincerely,
Rekha Ferdasanz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 115, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... June 2019 in 'Daily Miirror' news paper. The title was named as 'Biography...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: K
...s 'Biography of famous lecturer Mr.K.L.Silva '.But unfortunately some ...
^
Line 2, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Silva
...pos;Biography of famous lecturer Mr.K.L.Silva '.But unfortunately some facts wh...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... of famous lecturer Mr.K.L.Silva '.But unfortunately some facts which were pu...
^^^
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er Mr.K.L.Silva '.But unfortunately some facts which were published about hi...
^^
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...him for 10 years, I know him very well. Therefore I am writing this letter to point out s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'person'?
Suggestion: person
...ng false information regarding a famous persons also cannot be accepted. Hence I reques...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...famous persons also cannot be accepted. Hence I request you to correct all the above ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, regarding, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02595928078 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5823795142 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0769230769 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128567644815 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041235260803 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356791310789 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780950162058 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156674705237 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.