The given chart shows the number of hours spent by males and females on the computer for work and for leisure in three different year

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
...ile females spent just around 1.5 hours.There was a dramatic increase in the number o...
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Suggestion: , a
...round 4.5 between 1991 and 2000 for work,a rise of about 1.5 hours in 10 year.In 2...
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Suggestion: In
...rk,a rise of about 1.5 hours in 10 year.In 2010 males spent only 2 hours on the co...
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Suggestion: On
...ust 1 hour spent by females for leisure.On the other hand, in 2010 the number of h...
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Suggestion: This
...reased slightly, the figure was exact 4.This year females spent more hours for work ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... work and leisure than 1991 and 2010 on the compute.The figur were 3.5 and 2 respectivel. ...
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Suggestion: The
...isure than 1991 and 2010 on the compute.The figur were 3.5 and 2 respectivel. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e.The figur were 3.5 and 2 respectivel.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15322755158 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422222222222 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.4926829268 267% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 260.220419388 43.030603864 605% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 267.0 112.824112599 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 22.9334400587 262% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.645355818823 0.215688989381 299% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.55072872323 0.103423049105 533% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0239784508158 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.55072872323 0.15604864568 353% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239784508158 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.5 13.2329268293 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.42 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.3012195122 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.42 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.9970731707 236% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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