Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem? What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Surely there has been no time in the history where the lives of the people have changed more dramatically. A quick refection on a typical day reveals that overpopulation is one of the most prominent topics of the contemporary discussion. The following paragraphs will analyze inevitable causes and will lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, it is believe that one of the major reason of overpopulation is lack of education. In most of countries like India people highly effected by this problem. Moreover, people don’t have knowledge about the drawbacks of this trend. According to a research on india most of the people don’t know the population of their own nation.
On the flip side, government play vital role in order to control this problem. Government should aware people about the effects of the overpopulation on our globe. Furthermore, government should implement new rules and regulations to solve this problem.
To conclude, dealing with overpopulation is one of the most prevalent problems that faces almost all parts of the world today. Nevertheless, the concrete steps are discussed above can effectively strengthen this growing concern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, nevertheless, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 1207.87684729 83% => OK
No of words: 186.0 242.827586207 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38172043011 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.92707691288 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09311780111 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 139.433497537 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 313.2 379.143842365 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.6593931568 50.4703680194 35% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.4166666667 104.977214359 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249160471719 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848081309559 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632977111849 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137977104492 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610122589602 0.0609392437508 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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