A company has announced to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the decision?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I my society, unemployment is the biggest problem. 50 percent of people are unemployed and the other half is, do not get paid well. A company is announced to build a large factory near my community, this will prove beneficial for the my society in terms of getting a job, improving lifestyle, and it will also help in providing a better infrastructure then now.
First and foremost, people get job from factory. they will make money from it. For instance, In my city, a Information technology company inaugurated an office of their company, so my home town students which are qualify for that positions, now get a job easily. These days do not have to go to another state for finding a job. Therefore my city unemployment condition getting decrease in an information technology field as well as some other people also get job like peon, watch man, caretaker etc. so, this is very good news for my city in terms of increase the employment percentage.
Secondly, factory also play an important role to increase life style. For instance, In my city, now people are very attracted toward to make a career in information technology. And it helps in improving lifestyle. people are going to get a degree in information technology and as well as in other field because they hope that one they will got a job and life related problem will get less. Children going to school and they prefer to wear a clean cloth and they know different languages and culture which help them to make a good personality and act like civilise person.
Last but not least, factory help to increase the infrastructures directly or indirectly. For example, they help in make road hospitals and school, which is very useful for the local community. In addition to this, they also make awareness through their Trust and NGOs and founded them, which is also make a community to keep a benefited. For instance, plantation and dustbin distribution and teach them how to keep clean the society.
In all the advantages above, there is also another side of the factory. For example, factory make air pollution and water pollution which impact community life drastically. but from the intelligently management this will make a less impactful.
From the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that factory will be prove beneficials for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97721518987 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77702479068 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498734177215 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9162951984 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9545454545 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31818181818 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719382989771 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234441818667 0.076458572812 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329203557911 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495847316255 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368907366438 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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