What are the advantages and disadvantages of using CCTV cameras to fight crime?
Global crime has increase drastically these days. However, the development of technology played a crucial role in mitigate such a serious issue. One of the most effective example of the latest technology is installing surveillance cameras in public areas. This action indeed, has some positive and negative impact on people. This essay aims to explore the pros and cons of utilizing such cameras public places before coming to a conclusion.
First of all, there is no doubt that CCTV provides a feel of safety and security for people who are using such technology. For instance, lots of individuals prefer to live in buildings that have security cameras, which made them more secure about their children, cars and all other belongs against criminals and thefts. Second of all, it's irrefutable that surveillance cameras lessen the crime level in a plethora of places. Since, burglars and robbers think twice at least before doing any kind of illegal activities in areas where CCTVs are existed. The crime rate in Dubai for example considered one of the most lowest level among other nations due to such a great security cameras network along the city. Thus, criminals know that will be viewed and monitored if they doing any illegal activities. Finally, CCTVs participates in gathering an accurate information and evidences. Various nations especially an advance countries rely on surveillance cameras for investigation, as they provide an extremely precise data and footage about the kind of crime the date and time. Moreover, they might help to find the locations of some dangerous gangs or terrorists.
In contrast, CCTVs also has some disadvantages for people. To begin with, lack of privacy for individuals life. To illustrate, many people claim that install security cameras in public areas destroy their privet life. Furthermore, installing CCTVs in workplace might give a sense of poor trust for staff. As, it let them to think that they are being monitored and viewed, so they feel uncomfortable with that. Then, the very high cost of the installation. As it's not a regular camera, it's indeed a very sophisticated one, which connects with complicated severs and works under different conditions. Therefore, it's too expensive for some small shops and firms to have it.The last but not least, CCTVs will never stop the crime to be happened. Since it's a camera which only detect and record people's actions ,but will not halt any crime to be done like alarms for example which's connected directly to police offices.
In conclusion, Crime has conspicuously increased in last few years. However, installing CCTVs like any technology has a positive and negative side on minimizing the crime level in the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, as for, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, no doubt, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16515837104 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72269722867 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 728.1 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5077053088 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.32 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.68 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148910656997 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391497512886 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384831330928 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890107172393 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143080900647 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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