Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
it is often argued that speaking foreign language may causes serious issues when being an immigration abroad in some countries, where speak other languages. I strongly believe this statement and this essay will express my views detailed.
To begin with, it may cause a language barrier as far as someone uses foreign language for living, which is unable to deliver the significance for others clearly. For instance, if the foreign liver is paying for his shopping, he will not understand how much should he give due to the money receiver is damaged and he cannot make a complete conversation with the local sales. Therefore, the realistic matters of different languages should not be ignored because it may lead to a serious environment to interact with others.
Likewise, the language block is possible to cause a poor effect of social relationship. As long as there is just a few one could speak with the same language, the circle of friends for the foreign resident will be natural narrowed. A personal example would be the fact that my classmate at secondary school. he spoke Japanese as well as did not know Cantonese and English, hence, we were impossible to communicate with him as the language difference blocked our communication way. After a few years, his pressure was certainly high since no one can be his friends or even just talked with him and finally, he decided to return his nation unavoidably. Thus, the social matters are absolutely existed when the foreign inhabitant speak with the local citizen by different channel.
In conclusion, because of the issue in conversation as well as the weak social relationship from the unusual speaking, I entirely reckon that it would make serious consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, likewise, may, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03146853147 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78168114855 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604895104895 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6723868928 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.916666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200069909164 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760125693555 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0411024739806 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122936220185 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042281321973 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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