The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
The given bar graph depicts the information about the imprisonment in Great Britain, Australia, New Zealand, United States and Canada from 1930 to 1980.
Overall, United States was highest in given time frame except karle photo year 1930 and 1950 imprisonment numbers in UK gradually increased by passing decades.
In first your, Great Britain had around 30,000 imprisonment which continuously increased by passing 60 year.In last year it was at nearly 85000 which was the highest numbers for UK. Australia had 70000 prisoners in 1930 and following two decades surprise decrease was seen which was around 50,000. Then following three decades the figures oscillation and end up at nearly 50 thousands.
In 1930, New Zealand and United States had similar number of prisoner approximately, while Canada was at peak with 120 thousands. A amita Amitafter 10 year noticeable decline seen in New Zealand around 50,000.Then it marginally rise in following 40 years and end up at 10000 less than starting years. USA had maximum amount of prisoners in 1980 roughly 140 thousands.Canada had one 20000 in first year then figures fluctuating in whole period and it and up at 90 thousands.
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- Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is impor 56
- The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...ntinuously increased by passing 60 year.In last year it was at nearly 85000 which ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'figures'' or 'figure's'?
Suggestion: figures'; figure's
...0,000. Then following three decades the figures oscillation and end up at nearly 50 tho...
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Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
... Canada was at peak with 120 thousands. A amita Amitafter 10 year noticeable decl...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
...cline seen in New Zealand around 50,000.Then it marginally rise in following 40 year...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rises'?
Suggestion: rises
...ealand around 50,000.Then it marginally rise in following 40 years and end up at 100...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Canada
...prisoners in 1980 roughly 140 thousands.Canada had one 20000 in first year then figure...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20418848168 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80349748475 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.438205844 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105154846744 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536971007448 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324836356975 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779777770358 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265437965817 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.