In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting universities studies.
Discuss the advantage and disadvantage for young people who decide to do this.
Presently, study is necessary for the society. In believe that young people will be chosen for encouraged to travel or work for a year whether starting universities studies after finishing high school. Surely, I vote to immediately go to studies in university by reasons of this action will make us get continuous learning without pauses. but, lack of experience in the world of work and explore about ourself.
On the one hand, there are benefits acquire in the college such as continued to studies, we will focus more on our studies. A lot of knowledges impression and ready to continue the career in the future. Moreover, to be students will add considerable of contacts, attain the incredible self quality and the chance of getting a fantastic job based an academician. As the result,
the brainpower of fresh graduated will produce the active measure and pattern, graduating faster, still early and receive increasingly prepare from formal academic.
On the other hand, immediately become a colleger make our finances not much for supplies and just concentrate on speculate to what is delved. Furthermore, event of working and trip to various countries, sundry of region to train and also practice outside of faculty. Next, we can not be a lot of networking to many people in the universe.
In the inference, pass on the acquire at the time of succulent be granted will creates juvenile people serve the best generation and ready to return to community, competent in the fields. However, getting interlude of sit can be choice if expire wish be obtain the journey, divergent and over challenging.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...get continuous learning without pauses. but, lack of experience in the world of wor...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'study'.
Suggestion: study
...ire in the college such as continued to studies, we will focus more on our studies. A l...
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Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... universe. In the inference, pass on the acquire at the time of succulent be granted wil...
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Line 8, column 80, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...t the time of succulent be granted will creates juvenile people serve the best generati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06766917293 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82974597176 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4354713744 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.692307692 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214403399738 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694245450604 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122703693966 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962264800515 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120076167264 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.