Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course.
Write a letter to the college enrollment officer. In your letter
• explain why you are writing
• describe your circumstances
• ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enroll in the course
Dear Sir or Madam,
The purpose of my writing is to inform you about a computer course which is going to start at our college campus.
To begin with, as you know very well that i am very much interested in learning computers. I heard that you were asking the students to join that course.
Moreover, I dont have any experience or knowledge in doing such programs. There is a circumstance for the people who want to enroll in the program is he/she must complete basic computer skills.
Consequently, I would like to actively participate in the session and it really helpful to me in my future career and jobs. If you allow me to do this, I can share the relevant skills with my college junior students and our college will gain pride in the world.
I am looking forward to seeing how my suggestions translate into prompt actions from your side.your kind cooperation would be most appreciated.
Thanks,
Aarthi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... begin with, as you know very well that i am very much interested in learning com...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...dents to join that course. Moreover, I dont have any experience or knowledge in doi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, moreover, really, well, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70186335404 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.628745782 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701863354037 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.5928291423 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 4.34317383033 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2228673425 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759785827169 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550777063265 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107134800573 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696094233607 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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