Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Currently, it is believe that in this essay, I am absolutely is not in agreement on the increase price of petrol. In view of that way is not the best solution to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
On the one hand, the nothing benefit of this statement is only make the other major increase. Actually increasing price of petrol has the bad effect to folk. Its because, influencing on the other cost like public transportations. For example, in some developed countries, the economics transportation sharp expensive of influencing of petrol of costly. Moreover, this way like way of amateur to decrease traffic and pollution problems. Its due to, method to increase of petrol price is not researched by scientific. As an example, many developing countries unsuccessful choose policy because of does not in-depth research. As the result, this statement is not realistic, because it will add the big problem notably on the sector. It is no doubt that, the essential problems of traffic flow and pollution problem that is on the transport more and more increasing, it is not the gas.
On the other hand, probably there are also benefit on this statement that increasing of oil fee, improving of country's income. Perhaps also this plan has positive effect on the many people, notably to realize country's programs, but it need measure between advantage and disadvantage. Its due to, every statement which connecting to everyone have to be researched by detail. In several case, many people to reject of increasing oil price, because has negative effect on the some area. Therefore, this statement is not side to people's low, just take sides to people's wealthy. It is important that, increasing of gas price is not give more advantage.
In conclusion, there is many challenge to apply this statement. Perhaps needed more awareness of current problems because so much disadvantage without available solution. I do not believe, if petrol cost of increasing is able to of finishing the main problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nfluencing on the other cost like public transportations. For example, in some de...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'several cases'.
Suggestion: several cases
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun challenge seems to be countable; consider using: 'many challenges'.
Suggestion: many challenges
...e advantage. In conclusion, there is many challenge to apply this statement. Perhaps needed...
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Suggestion:
...ems because so much disadvantage without available solution. I do not believe, if...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09393939394 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87618542655 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512121212121 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2259291206 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.05 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259539045208 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848266158378 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912222565239 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191134656283 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102682097672 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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