Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Currently, it is believe that in this essay, I am absolutely not in agreement on the increasing price of petrol. In view of that, these ways are not the best solution to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
On the one hand, the disadvantages of this statement are only make the other sector increasing. Actually increasing price of petrol has the bad effect to folk. Its because, influencing on the other cost like public transportations. For example, some developed countries, the economics transportation sharp expensive of influencing of petrol of costly. Moreover, this way like way of amateur to decrease traffic and pollution problems. Its due to, methods like increase of petrol price are not researched by scientific. As an example, many developing countries unsuccessful choose policy because of does not in-depth research. As the result, this statement is not realistic, because it will add the big problem notably on those sectors. It is no doubt that, the essential problems like traffic flow and pollution problems that is on the transport more and more increasing, it is not reasoned by gas.
On the other hand, probably there is also benefit on this statement that is improving of country of income. This plan has positive effect on the most people, notably to realize country's programs, but it need measure between advantage and disadvantage. Its due to, every statement which connecting to everyone have to be researched by detail. In several case, many people to reject of increasing oil price, because has negative influence on the some area. Therefore, this statement is not side to people's low, just take sides on people's wealthy. It is important that, increasing of gas price is not give more advantage.
In conclusion, there are many challenges to apply this statement the society. Perhaps we needed more awareness of current problems because so much disadvantage without available solution. I do not believe, if petrol cost of increasing is able to of finishing the main problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'believed'.
Suggestion: believed
Currently, it is believe that in this essay, I am absolutely not...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...e of petrol has the bad effect to folk. Its because, influencing on the other cost ...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'several cases'.
Suggestion: several cases
...one have to be researched by detail. In several case, many people to reject of increasing oi...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
..., because has negative influence on the some area. Therefore, this statement is not ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17073170732 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91866238625 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5146762682 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.8 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252764629757 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798235720491 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831314789439 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18038731849 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952777360916 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.