Write a letter to the hotel manager for the inconvenience caused to you at his hotel. You had requested the receptionist to wake you up early who failed to do so.
Why you had requested?
What was the inconvenience caused?
What should the hotel do to avoid this?
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain to you about the inconvenience that I have had faced at your hotel due to the negligence as a part of the receptionist.
Last weekdays, I had paid a visit to New South Wales for a work-related conference of three days. I stayed at your hotel for the entire days. However, on the last day, I have to attend a dialogue in the morning. Therefore, I just requested the receptionist beforehand, to wake me up as early as possible.
Unfortunately, I did not receive any morning call by your staff and had failed to attend the meeting. The meeting was quite crucial with some overseas clients for the first time, although related to my promotion. I really felt very sad afterward. Moreover, the receptionist was arguing with me that he has no fault in this case and did not ready to apologize for the same. Certainly, it was a terrible experience.
Nevertheless, I would like to recommend you to take care of the guests alongside giving them wake-up calls in the morning. It should be the duty of the front desk agent to give the morning call to curtail any kind of inconvenience.
Take this matter into your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Douglas woods
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, moreover, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94999903916 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62380952381 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9334859283 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1428571429 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234556346599 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637560487207 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728108709638 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120201737775 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.095860893667 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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