You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Maria,
I hope you're doing great. I am writing in response to your concern about learning the death cause of our Bollywood actor, which is now becoming a major issue in the country.
A few months later, during the nationwide pandemic, a famous Bollywood star Sushant Singh Rajpoot has committed suicide in his house. This made everyone spellbound as the grief of losing a talented personality is obvious. However, after looking into the matter, the police of Mumbai found something suspicious. And now, the actor's father has lodged a complaint against his son's girlfriend and her family.
It seems to be a criminal offense. Therefore, the people of my nation are eagerly waiting for the announcement of criminals by the court. Because the belongings of the star were unclear to prove his mental illness. Also, the police of the state is unable to inquire about the case properly.
Being concerned for the actor's death, I recently participated in the survey conducted by an NGO, urging the administration to hand over the case to the Central Bureau of Investigation. If you're interested in providing justice to the actor and his family, then let me know, I'll send you the link of the survey.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours lovingly,
Amrit
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-01-09 | shain | 73 | view |
| 2022-01-03 | manu_kaur113 | 78 | view |
| 2021-01-31 | swodha | 81 | view |
| 2021-01-04 | skgurna4567@gmail.com | 70 | view |
| 2020-11-23 | Zoey1001 | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Maria, I hope youre doing great. I am writing in response t...
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Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...announcement of criminals by the court. Because the belongings of the star were unclear...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 25, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'actors'' or 'actor's'?
Suggestion: actors'; actor's
...se properly. Being concerned for the actors death, I recently participated in the s...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...the Central Bureau of Investigation. If youre interested in providing justice to the ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 274, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...actor and his family, then let me know, Ill send you the link of the survey. Loo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10849056604 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69251216367 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688679245283 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1698043442 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3571428571 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.49484536082 602% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132473611201 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458561294187 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626883793604 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642954775479 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694771200979 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.