The city council of Town X has proposed reducing the city’s electric expenses by switching all the lights in public buildings from incandescent bulbs to light-emitting diodes (LEDs). The switch would be made gradually as the old incandescent bulbs burn out, and the city council reasons that since LED lights burn brighter and cost no more to purchase, the switch would help Town X save money on electrical costs in the future.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered to help evaluate the efficacy of the city council’s proposal to save money on electrical costs. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the council’s prediction.
The author of the proposal suggest that the replacement of incandescent bulbs that are currenntly being employed in the public buiildings by led bulbs would result in lesser future energy costs, and virtually zero implementation cost. This proposl seems viable and the claims in the proposal in a superficial level, as it appeals to the intuitions that have build around the usage of leds and incandescent lights. However, when analysed critically, one would find the proposal is rife with ommisions pertaining to clarifications and justifications. The critical reader would have some queries generated, answers to which will clear the ambiguities and doubts regarding the proposal.
The author suggest a future cost saving in energy spendings due to the replacement. it would be interesting to look at the energy consumptions pertaining to the incandescent bulbs in public buildings. For example, if the public buildings operate almost all the times only at day time, the usage of any kind of inddor lighting could be near zero, given adequate daylight. In such occasions, changing the type of the bulbs used for indoor lighting would not bring about any cost cutting. Furthermore, if the employees were concsious about the power consumption of the incandescent bulbs and were thrifty intheir usage of artificial lighting earlier, now would not be as frugal due to the notion that led is an "energy saver". In such a case, the city council would experience increased electricity bills, contradicting the fundamental goal they are trying to achieve. thus it would be worthwhile to assess the contribution of incandescent lights to the energy consumption of public buildings.
The proposal also suggest that the replacement be done when the bulbs are burnt out. it would be interesting to assess its practical viability. For example, the there would be easier access to a supply of incanescent bulbs rather than the leds, at times of sudden burnouts. At such moments, it would be inconvenitent to the employess or the public for waiting for an led bulb. In such a scenario, led bulb replacements may result in social costs, in the form of delayed delivery of work or public frustration.
The suggested one by one replacement of bulbs strategy raises another subtle question in an economic sense. Whether the led bulbs are bought in bulk, stocked and used to replaced whenever needed, or bought in very small quentities when needed. In a case of stocking scenario, the council should look at the cost implications that are in the form of inventory costs. In a samll quantity buying case, they shuold consider the opportunity cost they incur by not buying in bulk. queries should be made to find the optimum balance, should the council decides to buy the leds.
The author of the proposal is clearly seen to be relaying on trivial and intuitive facts regarding energy conservation in general, rather than relating to the specific case. thus, it would prudednt to make above queries to clarify and prove the validity of the proposal more elaborately.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
this topic is about 'whether the change will save money' not about 'energy conservation '.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 500 350
No. of Characters: 2493 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.729 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.986 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.803 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 183 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 128 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 94 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.625 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.34 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.566 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...bts regarding the proposal. The author suggest a future cost saving in energy spending...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...nergy spendings due to the replacement. it would be interesting to look at the ene...
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Line 2, column 876, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...mental goal they are trying to achieve. thus it would be worthwhile to assess the co...
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Line 2, column 876, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: thus,
...mental goal they are trying to achieve. thus it would be worthwhile to assess the co...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t be done when the bulbs are burnt out. it would be interesting to assess its prac...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would be inconvenitent to the employess or the public for waiting for an led bul...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...mployess or the public for waiting for an led bulb. In such a scenario, led bulb ...
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Line 4, column 475, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Queries
... cost they incur by not buying in bulk. queries should be made to find the optimum bala...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...her than relating to the specific case. thus, it would prudednt to make above querie...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 55.5748502994 137% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2561.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 500.0 441.139720559 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.122 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9077076882 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 204.123752495 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486 0.468620217663 104% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 705.55239521 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5470325667 57.8364921388 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.347826087 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7391304348 23.324526521 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.67664670659 214% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316932113247 0.218282227539 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904471057527 0.0743258471296 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618779526816 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164229697476 0.128457276422 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874320615861 0.0628817314937 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.3799401198 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32208582834 103% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 98.500998004 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 12.3882235529 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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