You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• give details of your study plans
• explain why you want to get a part-time job
• suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Navneet,
How are you? I hope you are doing well in your business in Canada. I am writing this letter to inform you that I get selected in York university for master’s course of microbiology. My course is full time activity for 2 years duration and it will help me to become a professional in microbiology testing especially in pathogens handling.
However, the course fee is very high as per my budget, so I have decided to do part time job to aid my tuition fees during study in Canada. My classes will be in morning hours all weekdays at university department after than I will be free to do job in the evening.
I came to know that you are also living near the York university, so you will be best person for me to help in job search. I insist you to please contact your local residence regarding any opportunity if they are aware in nearby. Please let me know as early as possible if you come across with the vacancy.
Hope to see you in Canada soon.
Best wishes,
Vishal
India
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Navneet, How are you? I hope you are doing well i...
^^^
Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...;s course of microbiology. My course is full time activity for 2 years duration and it wi...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... per my budget, so I have decided to do part time job to aid my tuition fees during study...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...g near the York university, so you will be best person for me to help in job search. I ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou in Canada soon. Best wishes, Vishal India
^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nada soon. Best wishes, Vishal India
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44864864865 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59890407875 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4274464675 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8181818182 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307775425803 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11889398657 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756188072302 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181709538754 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797935575194 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.