Some people think that government should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that these people should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is sometimes argued that the government should spend money on supporting creative artists. Others contend that those people should be funded by alternative sources. In my opinion, I believe that money for art fields should come from both governments and others sources.
There are several reasons why some art projects definitely need help from the state grant. These works of art can certainly play as creative taking points which bring out numerous cultural values to the area of the city. In New York, for example, there are many new statues and sculptures in public spaces which have been developed recently by artists. These artworks represent the culture, heritage and history thereby educating people about the city, expressing meaningful messages about life to the communities. They also act as landmarks to attract visitors and tourists, governments and local residents therefore should encourage and give financial support to creative artists to produce more this kind of arts.
On the other hand, I can totally understand the arguments against government funding for art. The main reason could be that governments have more important concerns than simply splurge money on art. The state budgets need to be spent on education, healthcare, infrastructure and security. If the human’s life were not ensured, any concerns about art could become irrelevant. Another reason could be taken into account is that art also is a job like any other career. Therefore artists could earn a great deal of money from selling their works of art. So the governments should focus on improving and enhancing the quality of human’s life.
In conclusion, there are some obviously reasons why artists should rely on alternative sources of financial support, but as far as I am concerned, state’s help is sometimes necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30927835052 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73885964104 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591065292096 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3103537909 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305545385311 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993886513652 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978273898967 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204584765399 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116635895657 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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