1. People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves their families and the society so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that more people have a tendency to extend their working hours and it may exert pernicious impacts upon themselves, their families and the community. In my opinion, I completely agree with this viewpoint and the government should put a ban on the frequency of long working hours.
On the one hand, a significant increase in the working hours has brought employees certain values. In fact, more time spent on working results in higher proportion of work they have done. This means that they are more likely to fulfill their assignments within the shortest of time.
On the other hand, I strongly argue that the negative effects of this trend far outweigh the positive ones. Firstly, people lengthening their working hours stand higher chances of suffering from various detrimental health-related issues such as fatigue, eye strain, and even anxiety disorders and stroke. Therefore, it would result in low work productivity as they cannot fully concentrate on their tasks and making more errors at work, sometimes they even have to sick leave. Secondly, such kinds of jobs can have serious consequences on their families and the whole society. From their families’ perspective, busy working schedules preclude family members from gathering together to make daily conversation or taking on a long trip. Hence, their family bonds among them will be weakened. Furthermore, overworked people do not have enough time to enjoy their lives and do voluntary work.
In conclusion, I personally reckon that long hours at work should be limited by virtue of their adverse impacts on themselves, their family relationships and the community
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77987982907 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609848484848 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8672262028 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406628509143 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144568521712 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750415624733 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272771266966 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425843424918 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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