Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child's development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
There is a controversial issue about what plays a significant role in the development of children. Some teachers advocate that parents mostly influence their mental and physical growth, while some social workers state that both TV media and friends mainly affect their nurturing phases. In this essay, I will consider both points of view and agree with the idea of parental dominance in the upbringing.
Let us start with reasons why some teachers argue that parents greatly contribute to the child's development. The first reason is that children learn the majority of basic skills from their parents. From childhood to adolescence, children spend most of their time in parental environment, which generally forms their personality. As a result, they partly acquire some habits and outlook from their parents. Another reason is that parents decide for their children in initial years. Children usually learn what their parents prioritize for them, until they form their unique preferences, but it usually takes a long time, so parents play a decisive role in their formative stage.
However, some social workers say that television and friends have a major impact on child's formation. They justify their opinion with the following arguments. Firstly, children frequently start to speak, when they interact with other children. Friends naturally force silent children to speak, because they feel more confident with peers rather than their parents. Secondly, children normally accumulate information about the world through TV. Since parents also have limited knowledge and tend to be unable to answer some tricky questions, children turn to television in order to satisfy their curiosity. Therefore, they often become different from their parents, since documentaries, for example, change dramatically their view.
In conclusion, even though some social workers propagate the essential role of friends as well as TV media, I think that children mainly grow under parental influence for the above mentioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52903225806 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61599975815 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590322580645 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9978674936 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.823529412 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179431803384 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652693931945 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595443339886 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116012276031 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366827291093 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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