Should private schools receive government funding?
The debate about whether privately-owned educational institutions should be funded by the government still persists. The schools are business establishment, and their profit should be used fund the institution, but they are beneficial in some ways to the public and government, which makes them deserve the government's financial support.
Just like most non-governmental corporations, private schools are business organisations that generate revenue. Through tuition fees and service expenses that the parents and students pay, these institutions mostly earn enormous income as well as make considerable profit. This is evidenced by the recent report which showed private institutions as top earners in Nigeria. So, this income, rather than sharing it among the company's owners, should be used in acquiring facilities and upgrading equipment, instead of obtaining funds from the state.
However, with government funding, the exceptional services that is being rendered to the public by these private schools, will increase. Not only do they ensure most children have unlimited access to quality education but also teach these young adults moral behaviour, which is essential for the growth of the nation. The majority of these students always win awards in mathematics, English and cultural value, even though the schools have limited resources. Such remarkable achievement will increase if the government funds private schools
In conclusion, although private schools are profitable organisations that ought to solely finance themselves, the positive effect of their contribution to the country is of immense value. Greatly strengthened will they be with government funding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, then, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87398373984 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01570404445 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0619498064 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.363636364 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.18181818182 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348456957069 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126305366018 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102237858673 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216164097366 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829844780916 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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