do you agree or disagree businesses should hire employees for their entire lives
In this fast-moving and high developed technology society, people are having trouble with finding and maintaining jobs for their entire lives. most of the company utilizes machines and replaces the old workers by young and brilliant workers. workers who do not adopt in this society might feel anxiety for their job. however, for the long-term effect, I believe that business should not hire employee for their entire lives with the following reasons.
business is not the voluntary groups. it is organization that produce profit with low cost.Biggest company in the world that produce over billions of outcomes in a month, Apple and Samsung, are the organization which maintained flexible human resources management. they can fire the workers no longer regarded as necessary in the company since they were built. it is inevitable policy, to compete and win the competition for their prosperity. The effortless way of winning the game is resulted from the management of human resource. Whether each company use right workers in the right place and time with the sufficient number is deciding success or failure of the company. furthermore, the growth of the company eventually leads the increase wealth of the own nation and cause economic prosper.
In addition, appropriate anxiety of the future which workers can be fired can stimulate workers for the better performance. The latest high-tech machines are constantly replacing the place of the human. Naturally, people are searching and studying the materials that machines are unable to follow or mimic the performance.For instance, few decades ago, nowadays’ high school math level was sufficient to solve the logic or problems in the work place. however, over 90 percent of the workplace require the basic level of university mathematical ability and excellent logic skill. furthermore, new machines and computer program are released as technology is renewed. If companies grantee a lifetime job than workers might be retreated in this fast-moving society.
As a result, not working as a lifetime workers might be cruel to the employees, however, it eventually had led the quick development of technology, and most of the company increase the profit by winning the competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41076487252 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8663432119 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5680263781 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.5376344086 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163503022701 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537880639305 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104422244884 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102109986289 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135798729866 0.0645574589148 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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