You are unable to attend to your friends wedding in Britain. In this letter.
-Tell her what you think about her wedding plan .
-Apologize for not attending.
-suggest date for future meeting.
Dear sarika,
It was such a pleasant surprise when I received your wedding card yesterday.unfortunatly,I shall not able to attend your wedding because of my job interview on the same day . and this interview is most important for me to get my dream job.
I have read from your card that you have planned a traditional wedding ceremony in Britain.All decoration , food and your wedding dress will be our traditional Nauvari saree.you are in Britain but you do not forget our indian culture.I am very happy for that .
I am really sorry that I shall not be able to come ,but I have a suggestion .Why don't you two come to India after finishing all ceremony of wedding .then you can also spend a few days with me and you can also show our country ,our tradition,culture and test verity of indian foods to your husband,visit different places and so on. Please consider this proposal.
I wish you had been holding each other's hand for life time take care of each other and enjoy this sweet journey,happy married life .
Hoping to see you soon!
Yours lovingly,
sadhana.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78609625668 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95467993091 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668449197861 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.410567568 44.8134815571 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.857142857 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 2.54639175258 785% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2887865363 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121050888718 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606362877872 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146182157097 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059877466405 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.