We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.
It is thought by many that nowadays there is no opportunity to help each other , and people can only interested in their own society . I partly disagree with this point because of several reasons .
On the one hand, in our day life becomes expensive as well as adifficult. People especially married couples can encounter different obstacles on the stepping to a real life. In this case people try to live for themselves along with to build their own life, obviously they have not extra money and time for helping to other people. Another reason , meanwhile, can be person's desire . Sometimes, people themselves do not give a hand each other, however they can do it. It is simply, they just want to be more and more things, namely they are greedy person. For example, my neighbour has many own markets and even restaurants , more specifically he is rich. But when an executive of our street asks him about supporting some poor families or give some money for youth fond, his reaction is always negative. Owing to these reasons I a bit disagree with this view.
On the other hand, there some reasons, that people not have to afraid of doing some charities. Primarily, we must not lose person's quality, which called human responsibility. It is one that we should put it to the first place among others. Becouse if you have this quality it means that you are not only a kind person, but also that you are useful member of the society. Secondly, you ought to believe God, that one day your a little charity, may be returned bigger as a reward. For instance, the day before yesterday I helped to an old woman to cross the road in the street. So , yesterday it was heavy raining, and a kind man picked me up by the car. Although, these are the sole reasons , why I disagree with this point but as for me they stand out among many others.
In conclusion, though the majority of people consider not to pay attention to the surrounding people, I think helping others is better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59259259259 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47972199855 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3108891325 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161725315953 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455048940566 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362908222851 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100716170004 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263961585437 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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