Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Nowadays, making friendship between some people is easier than the past due to convenient communication in social networks and changing the people's culture. Although these details make it easy, close friends make someone happier than casual friends. In my opinion, we should have ability to make friendship to some people who make us delighted like our family. We should realize our ideal person and go find that person. Actually It can be hard and we need adequate time for doing that.
First, when we know about our favorite things, we would find them in some places. In fact, mutual things move first step for making relationship with each other. For instance, once I decided to attend in university and to educate for master degree. In classes, my classmates and I started to speak about our course and everything which was mutual for us. It could be a reason to start friendship among us. After those days, now I have three friends who are my close friends. Thus every time we want go for entertainment and hobby, we will go out with together.
Second, close friend can help us when we have an awful problem any moment and anywhere. Because these problems are coming from a significant person that they love him. For example, my close friend, Ali has crashed in the Azadi street and called me for helping him. So I went to help him and bring his car to a garage. Therefore, if Ali was not my close friend, it would be hard for me that help him.
Third, meeting with some people who you love them can impressive for you that you see your dear friends who had best memory with you. As I should say, I had dear friend who were my classmates in English class for six months. A friend set a time for meeting that we gathered in a coffee shop. We have spoken about joyful moments that were fun for us. After that we were so excited and we wish best dreams for each other. It can happen due to close friends who makes happy each other.
In conclusion, everyone must have ability to make a friendship like his family. Therefore, we know our personality and find a person who has mutual things with us. And, we must know that close friends can help us in strict situation. Also, close friend can influence on our morale and they are a good enthusiasm for us in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...three friends who are my close friends. Thus every time we want go for entertainment...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... awful problem any moment and anywhere. Because these problems are coming from a signif...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the best'.
Suggestion: had the best
... you that you see your dear friends who had best memory with you. As I should say, I had...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, if, second, so, therefore, third, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50363196126 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30961515852 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489104116223 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.2491131444 48.9658058833 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.8888888889 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2962962963 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7037037037 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201928042896 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621408104494 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484690043451 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126618346659 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484704341326 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.