Some people think it is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and do a different kind of jobs. Do you agree or disagree?
Changing profession at mid age is always a debatable topic. It is argued by a significant number of individuals that modification in profession is more appropriate for a candidate in the career once in a life and do a variety of duties. In my opinion, transfer of jobs from one field to another can have more negative outcomes as compared to benefits therefore, I believe it should be avoided.
To begin with, single career for long run is beneficial for individual to become master in that particular field, therefore people should avoid the steps of changing career. Many years of experience develop skills and talent of an individual. In addition to that, it boost the confidence of a candidate to make bold decisions during critical conditions for that reasons managers are paid high salaries as compared with staff employees. Therefore changing profession is not fruitful in terms of experience as the candidate has to start from the base in another profession.
Secondly, changing career can show adverse impacts on the career growth and mentally challenge to an employee. Different jobs have different work cultures therefore changing profession means person has to change his style of working which candidate may finds difficult to adopt and also, change in job does not add value for another profession. Therefore changing career does not add profitable result for the candidate as well as for the organization, hence this step should not be considered as healthier for professionals.
In conclusion, I completely disagree with the notion because of the various drawbacks mentioned in above paragraphs and believe that professions must be chosen wisely after consulting experts at the start of a journey.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20577617329 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94248852782 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9534540749 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.090909091 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 7.06120827912 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194881514045 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709905001759 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562052387845 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10598115695 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395637601803 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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