Although nowadays people are reading news though internet, newspapers still remains of value.do you agree or disagree.
Newspapers are good source of taking news. In today's contemporary era most of the news are taken by people via internet but still some people love to read newspapers. According to my perception despite of dominance of internet news,some people like taking news from newspapers.
On the one hand, in today's fast paced world internet news are regarding better over newspapers as internet provide latest news around the clock as well as every person can access internet services. Therefore, people take news from the internet. Secondly,taking news from internet is convenient because at present people have network connections at their cell phones thus, they can search about any news at any time with less charges. Finally, internet news create more impression on minds of people due to audio and visual contents and and they remember for long period of time. For an instance, online news display the Gangster news, illegal activities etcetera with visual content which brings cooperation of public to eradicate these activities. Most importantly, different news channels are available on the internet, we can take genuine information by comparing them
On the other hand,in spite of taking news from internet in these days, still people read news papers. First of all, some people ,especially ,old ones are fond of reading newspapers as they have habit of reading. To exemplify, instead of taking news from internet people love to read news at morning with cup of tea. Besides this, people regard it a cheaper source of taking news as no need of internet connection for newspapers. Additionally,from point of view of focus, people read newspapers as they can read without distractions which generally happens in internet news such as network problems and extra advertisements. What is more, newspapers are either cheap or useful which can be reused.
To conclude, even though most of people take news online yet I believe that newspapers also preferred by people at present
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, as well as, first of all, in spite of, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22570532915 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73956800418 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554858934169 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6060639693 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1333333333 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319239577247 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144966689667 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054655092461 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237149396341 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459500744355 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.