Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.
The relative importance of History and Science and Technology is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain which is one of the most important school subjects.
The reason for History is one of the most important school subjects may involve the recognition that scientists who often work in a small laboratory are rather restricted in terms of the development of basic sciences and human civilization. By contrast, those who have learnt history may learn a lesson from historical problem. They tend to be more infallible, which is a very important factor in academic field, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with social issues.
However, the obvious argument in favour of Science and Technology subjects are more important is than Science and Technology subjects are more advance with the times than History subjects. Science research and technology development is connected to the society, which may benefit the whole body of mankind, and unlike History subject, Science and Technology subjects are exploring the unknown world and advancing human development.
I personally think that study in Science and Technology subjects can alleviate the food shortage and overcome the diseases mean that solve the famine problem and extension of life expectancy. If there were more food supply, people would be more likely to live and independent life, rather than begging from others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28761061947 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74192083141 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553097345133 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.1566296715 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.375 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.25 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375725012044 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160721637264 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106719503779 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234406394813 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880694603619 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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