People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Many at times in life, we are faced with a dilemma or a turning point where we have to make a decision. Such a decision may have much further reaching impacts than we can imagine at the moment. While decision making is best done when we trust our 'gut', most people do not know how to listen to their gut. They are so blinded by the humdrum and pressure of life that their internal feelings get washed out and more often than not, they end up making a poor decision. Such decisions are generally made emotionally, rather than with logic. While there are times where we can make an emotion-based, calculated decision, relying purely on emotion leads our brain to not think clearly and we end up making a erroneous decision. Then there are a set of people, who after having made a decision emotionally, realize that their decision may have far-reaching negative consequences and thus try to justify it by using logic. Such types of people are generally poor decision makers.
Since childhood, most of us are taught to be tenacious and to never give up no matter how hard the going is. An important aspect to realize is that, we must stand by our decisions, no matter the outcomes. Because that reveals the true character of a person. A good decision entails, clearly thought out plans and risks, a logical flow to proceed with the plan and the implementation. Such a decision falls under the logical realm. These kind of decisions tend to be fruitful as most of the risk assessment has been done and hence the outcome can be predictable. On the other hand, a decision made in the spur of the moment due to an emotional imbalance of the chemicals in the brain does not generally promise positive results. Such decisions come in the category of emotional responses. These kinds of decisions tend to leave everything to 'fate' and such people just hope that everything will work out for them in the end. For example, if a business executive has been issued a notice regarding the polluting nature of his manufacturing factories, he can make a calculated logical decision to look into the effluents and waste disposal of his factories and invest to help decrease pollutants in the waste flow, or he can take a spur of the moment decision and try to bribe the inspectors to report false improvements. If the person takes the latter decision, sooner or later the executive will be caught and after that his downfall will be certain. In such cases, if the executive states some banal excuse of not having enough money to invest on a new filtration system or facing some troubles in his life, it would be clear that the person is a poor decision maker as he is justifying his emotional response with logic later on. On the other hand if the person took the former decision, it is likely that he will have a good working relation with the authorities and have a successful continuance of his venture.
While it may seem that the term 'poor decision makers' are attributed to emotional-thinkers, it may not always be true. Many at times a person just does not have to capability to keep his emotions apart. They are so burdened with the 'what-ifs' that they cannot let logic take over. While such decisions may not always turn out to be wrong, the possibility is high. Most people in the world are incline to think more emotionally than logically due to their upbringing. For example, a child who has been molly-coddled right from his childhood will most likely go on to make emotional decisions in the future whereas a child who had a thoroughgoing martinet of a parent, may have much better logical decision making abilities.
Despite the circumstances in life, it is always better to take a calculated decision than a decision based on the turmoils of your 'heart'. Whenever faced with a decision-making scenario, it is a good strategy to think about the scenario in a different language than our common tongue. This enables our logical side of the brain and almost immediately helps us to take a logical decision. Finally, decision making like anything else in life comes with practice. The more a person tries to make decisions, the better he/she will become in taking correct decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 700, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... not think clearly and we end up making a erroneous decision. Then there are a se...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... our decisions, no matter the outcomes. Because that reveals the true character of a pe...
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Line 3, column 432, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...decision falls under the logical realm. These kind of decisions tend to be fruitful as mos...
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Line 7, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e more a person tries to make decisions, the better he/she will become in taking ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, then, thus, whereas, while, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 33.0505617978 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 101.0 58.6224719101 172% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3449.0 2235.4752809 154% => OK
No of words: 731.0 442.535393258 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71819425445 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.19971265256 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69746491113 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 323.0 215.323595506 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441860465116 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1119.6 704.065955056 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.7949486276 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.78125 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.84375 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290852917929 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891665224991 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612283222862 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205273261745 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00611885954986 0.0667264976115 9% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.