These days, many people are interested in buying organic food even though it is often more expensive than conventionally produced food.
What are some reasons that people prefer organic food?
Do you think it is important to buy organic food despite the higher price?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There are two main reasons people prefer organic food: Organic food is better for our health, and it is better for the environment. Certainly, organic food costs more than conventionally produced food, but considering its benefits, it is well worth the price.
People who buy organic food know how good it is for our health. Conventionally produced food has many additives. For example, fruits and vegetables are grown with the use of pesticides and herbicides. These poisons stay on our food, and we ingest them when we eat. In the past few years, this can cause serious health problems such as cancer. Cows on conventional farms are fed hormones and antibiotics. We also ingest these things when we drink milk and eat beef. Organic food, on the other hand, does not contain any kind of poisons or additives. It is clean and fresh and good for our health.
In addition to being good for our health, organic food is good for the environment. The pesticides and herbicides that are used with conventionally produced food poison the environment as well as our bodies. These things can harm insects and other animals and deplete the soil of nutrients. Organic food, on the other hand, is produced in harmony with the environment. Organic farming methods help build up healthy soil and use natural controls for insects and weeds.
Organic food can be expensive. However, there is nothing more important than our health or the natural environment we live in. If we spend a little more money so we can eat organic food, then we just spend a little less money on other, less important things. Buying organic food is a good use of our money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, well, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82624113475 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58734300893 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496453900709 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1881397146 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.05 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392690281066 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148752599845 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121710762171 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291733447191 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900531389871 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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