Some people think that it is more important lo plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a matter of fact that plantation of trees is directly proportional for the healthy environmental condition.If asked, I firmly agree to the statement. This essay will highlight that this certainly is a rational approach that needs to be opted. My inclination is elaborated in the ensuing paragraph with examples.
To support my argument, the foremost reason is, trees are considered as the originator of pure and fresh oxygen. If trees and plants are removed there would be imbalance created in environment. To illustrate this, in 2003, there was a small hole in the earths ozone layer. In a survey conducted by the professors of Environmental department at University of Sydney they came to conclusion that deforestation was the major cause of it. Architects and Civil Engineers kept on building luxurious apartments and removing natural vegetation due to which they had to suffer.
In addition to that, when the forest and centuries are pulled out, not only the environmental conditional but wildlife also gets affected. Forest is the house of animals if it is taken away from them then it would be difficult to handle them. For example, in India near Chennai whole forest was replaced with the township of certain employees so the animals that lived there came into the residential area and killed people. So unfortunately, people asked the builder to shift their stay to new and safer place and the problem was solved.
Moreover, trees also acts as food for herbivorous and omnivorous animals. And these both are consumed by carnivorous animals. Hence, it would also affect food chain.
To conclude, if trees are grown there would be balance in environmental cycle as well as wildlife cycles. Government should also take preventive measures to tackle the situation and one of the solution is the number of trees cut out for building residence,the same amount of trees should be planted at other place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
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Message: Put a space after the comma
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... of trees cut out for building residence,the same amount of trees should be planted ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08544303797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87977291684 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0819323326 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811731333785 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231656356622 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268284951324 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429892493257 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222844151164 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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