Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television or computer screen. This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore Parents should strictly limit the time children spend in this way.
To what extent, do you agree or disagree.
Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television or computer screen. This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore, parents should strictly limit the time that children spend in this way. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
Thanks to technology advancements, human’s life has never been easier. However, children are beginning to turn to technological devices, which is believed to cause adverse implications to their health and behaviors. From my perspective, parental intervention is definitely a must.
To begin with, extensive use of television and computer could have serious repercussions for both physical and mental well-being of a child. Children who lead a sedentary lifestyle may have trouble maintaining concentration at school and are easily prone to a number of health problems. Moreover, those who have little chance to be exposed to the outside world at an early age are likely to face serious neurodevelopmental disorders, namely antisocial behaviors, depression and autism. As a matter of fact, parents should restrict the amount of time for television or computer and encourage their kids to take up sports.
Another reason could be that the early-stage development of a child should be not only about electronic devices alone, but also about relationships and interactions within the society. This helps them to enrich their understanding of the surroundings, discover their own strengths and weaknesses and weigh their own actions, which could lead to them maintaining good self-control that benefits the children’s life in the long run. Therefore, there is no doubt that parental guidance plays an indispensable role in instructing and orienting their children to prevent them from overusing the devices that could cause problematic behaviors such as vandalism and violent tendencies.
In summary, time limitation from parents for using electronic gadgets is absolutely recommended for the children’s sake. It is also worth considering that parents should spend more time with the kids to minimize the negative impacts mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in summary, no doubt, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61300309598 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2319549628 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594427244582 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3964141598 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418494635856 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149107726499 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165922557399 0.0667982634062 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272360837751 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.32072015629 0.056905535591 564% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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