Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss.
There is no doubt that jail is very tough experience for anyone who live or stay even for short time there. therefore, many people believe that such punishment should be halted as it’s not always the best solution to minimizing the crime rate in their society as it’s very significant to seek for the core of problem. In contrast, lots of other people still find the prison is the optimal place for some dangerous individuals who have extremely bad influence on the society. This essay aims to discuss both views in further detail before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, it’s irrefutable that prison is the best sanction for vicious individuals who broke the rules and do some illegal activities. Moreover, it provides a great lesson for other people who are thinking to do the same that they might ended in jail. therefore, such action makes the whole community safer and free from criminals. Furthermore, jails anywhere is a bad area to spend even few minutes over there. Thus, the majority of people are doing their best to avert such an experience in their whole lifetime as well as it impacts on people images in their society. For instance, Syrian criminals who convicted by any illegal issue might find massive difficulties in finding jobs or be accepted in any reputable university. That's why entering prison might affect on people lives in various ways.
On the flip side, jail might exacerbate criminals attitude and motivate them to do more crimes. To illustrate, prison contains different criminals who might be committed for small crimes such as robberies or very serious crime such as murdering or drug trading or smuggling. Thus, a dozen of stories and bad experience might be distributed throughout the prison and attracting others to perform more crime. As a result, the crime level may drastically increase due to prison penalty. therefore, putting all guilty individuals in side jail will only postpone the issue. In fact, government should investigate in the core of these issues to overcome and alleviate the level of crime. For example many advanced nations such as Canada are generating a new punishment methods based on the crime type such as volunteering tasks. Such these actions played an instrumental role in enhance criminals attitude as well as prepare them again to become a productive member of their society.
To sum up, prison is very debatable issue for a lot of people as some of them think that it’s the best way to reduce the crime level while others believe that worsen that issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99297423888 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61607496232 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526932084309 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0902664873 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.35 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256492225472 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684147605906 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052608789104 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164954432148 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489132687279 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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