Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
I am absolutely agreed. Risk is an important aspect of our life and if we are to make money, we have to deal with some unperedictable dangers. There are some reasons to support my opinion as follows:
First of all, there is not any task which does not include some risks. On the better word, what kind of activity in this world is completely safe? Humans try to overcome to different dangers continuously and thriving in them, would lead to breakthroughs. I strongly believe in this idiom: "No pain, no gain". Failing in this route and learning from our mistakes strengthen us to resist against the brutal world; Those pains would be followed by a victory. So, making risks means growing and being conservative means retarding.
As the second reason, a boom in your wealth, entails a boom in your courage and your speed. It is indispensable that the rich have failed many times, according to their confessions. I mean if we look at the rich, we will understand that they have made many risks and have lost many things; Finally, someday, they succeeded. This point issues the necessity of taking risks and being quick; Because hotshot people have succeeded in this way. Which one do you prefer? a) taking their advice and trying new things or b) remaning at the shadow and avoiding any unreliable tasks; So, the biography of wealthy guys enable us to choose item a.
The nature of the world can be the third reason. Probabilities is a crusial subject in mathematics which teach us this important lesson that every thing in our world, are unperedictable and if one wan to find those kinds of things, should explore other worlds! Were it not for existence of probablity, knowing consequences of our actions would cause many serious problems in the life. I think, it is a boon to us that we do any thing without being consious about its results.
As a summary, I think working quicly and taking risk is better than working slowly and making sure that every thing is correct. Because, not only we will save time and we will have ample time to try variety of things, but also we could learn rom our mistakes.
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- TPO-25 - Integrated Writing Task 76
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- TPO-51 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- TPO 53 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: A
...d in this way. Which one do you prefer? a taking their advice and trying new thin...
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Message: Did you forget something after 'a'?
...f wealthy guys enable us to choose item a. The nature of the world can be the thi...
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Line 4, column 424, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
... I think, it is a boon to us that we do any thing without being consious about its result...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, second, so, then, third, i mean, i think, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68548387097 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57834098523 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8718641992 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7368421053 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26315789474 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17825715597 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529124468864 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785055462054 0.0737576698707 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981292258287 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477958024098 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.