hat is called human nature is really a reflection of the human condition if all people had a
reasonable share of territory and resources, such products of 'human nature' as war and crime
would become extremely rare.
Are war, crime really the product of human condition? I do not agree so. However, if we observe the different condition like in science, history or simply daily life we can see that it is produced by human nature but not by the circumstances.
Firstly, just look at a school student, every class in the school has a student who has a tendency to bullying the other student.
Moreover, has a tendency to snatch other student stuff or fight with the other. Moreover, has a tendency to irritate other students
with their clothes or low status. This tendency can call a human nature not the human condition.
Secondly, we can observe a similar condition in the territory of the animal. Every territory of the animal has a leader who dominates the area. The other animal of the group is shown submission to the leader. If anyone is failed to show reverent to the leader they will punish. Another one is, if we look back to a few eras ago, we can understand better by our ancestor. For example, in India subcontinent different group attacked like British, Persian, partigues because of the resource was abundant in this territory. They ruled for many years in India. They also had enough resource and territory but still, they ruled because it is the nature of the human to become ruler over someone and make himself foremost.
However, it cannot be denied that some human condition is made by the human because of the resource and territory. For example, Partigue attracted Indian territory because of the resource, land. That time India was so famous of its abundance of land, crops, wealth etc. If we see the history of the Red Indian a similar issue happened with them.
To sum, every issue has prons and cons and we must be careful of such thing. No matter how much better form anyone try to introduce there is always remain something behind of it. However, the statement is contrary to my observation and there is ample of example to prove that it is the natural human predisposition to engage in the aggresive issue.
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- hat is called human nature is really a reflection of the human condition if all people had areasonable share of territory and resources, such products of 'human nature' as war and crimewould become extremely rare. 50
- The most important problems in the world will be solved in our lifetime 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... student stuff or fight with the other. Moreover, has a tendency to irritate other stude...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...roup is shown submission to the leader. If anyone is failed to show reverent to th...
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Line 11, column 116, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
.... No matter how much better form anyone try to introduce there is always remain som...
^^^
Line 11, column 149, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...anyone try to introduce there is always remain something behind of it. However, the st...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72676056338 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51778990757 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518309859155 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4808902982 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2727272727 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1363636364 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212393792225 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065593257041 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103160750508 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111103981166 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923254171605 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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