People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems?
Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Nowadays, people suffer from various threats while living in big cities. Environmental issues and health problems are the major threats which people suffer in their daily life. The government should look after such issues and take the necessary steps to solve it rather than motivating the people to leave the city.
According to me, environmental pollution is mostly caused by the factories and industries that are laid near the cities. For instance, plastics. Usage of plastic materials such as bags, covers, glass, etc, should be banned to shun environmental pollution. These materials are thrown into streets instead of disposing it in the garbage cans. Sometimes they
burnt to ashes which creates smoke leading to air pollution. Another example is the chemical dyes which are produced by the factories. Due to improper sewage system, they get mixed with the river water and thus destroying the aquatic life. My opinion is that they can recycle the materials again rather than using it once to avoid pollution.
On the other hand, people suffer from health problems due to improper diet and unhealthy foods. An example of such habit is the fast foods. People are lazy to cook nowadays, as they have a different working schedules and hence they go for the fast foods or order foods online. This is unhealthy because the materials added in them would cause acidity and stomach infections. My point is that consumption of fresh fruits and vegetables could keep them fit and healthy.
In conclusion, the government should create awareness among the people in keeping the city clean and having a healthy life instead of moving to the rural areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...vating the people to leave the city. According to me, environmental pollution is mostly caus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09191176471 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49157045551 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.696041685 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4705882353 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2034088229 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539959070275 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750326531593 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119469191384 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993379958427 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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