The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what extent do you agree?
Maintaining one's health can effectively be done through daily physical workout. This statement is agreeable to a greater extent because there are few other factors also that contribute to it. Considering the importance of exercise, it's points are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
Following a healthy lifestyle begins with sparing at least an hour for fitness. Any sort of disease or ailment can be cured if the person performs yoga, does exercise or goes for a walk. This thing has been scientifically proven and several surveys have agreed to the given aspect. Indeed, God is a wonderful creator and he had made it capable for the human beings to cure themselves without outer assistance. It is often found that the people who get up early and workout remain active throughout the day. Such activities help in balancing the ingredients of the body such as heart health, respiration, reproduction and many more.
It is also often believed that apart from exercise, intake of balanced diet is equally important. Otherwise the body may face some deficiency in one thing or the other. If eating includes more intake of junk food so it will leave negative result. Green leafy vegetables and other natural resources need to be the part of efficient lifestyle. Dietitians, these days, suggest various things that detox our body by clearing all the impurities within in a shorter duration as compared to other activities. Stay happy and positive is also a way to achieve or reach the final goal.
In conclusion, it can be said that it is true to a major level whereas other things also play pivotal role. Everything needs to go hand in hand in order to gain development of health as desired. After all, remaining fit is the key to success. All the things, including food, exercise, yoga, happiness, in general, can bring the the change that a person wishes to see in oneself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Maintaining ones health can effectively be done through ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
... of balanced diet is equally important. Otherwise the body may face some deficiency in on...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'hand in'.
Suggestion: hand in
...ay pivotal role. Everything needs to go hand in hand in order to gain development of health as ...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... yoga, happiness, in general, can bring the the change that a person wishes to see in o...
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Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... yoga, happiness, in general, can bring the the change that a person wishes to see in o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, after all, apart from, at least, in conclusion, in general, sort of, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92452830189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69283029444 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663522012579 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.450402584 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.4210526316 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0711483553997 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199240093178 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0212118484136 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441000375485 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190945553773 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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